}{
inserts words
into the field
the others approach
the meaning there
nothing more
than their experience
}{
they were repeated
where the sky
was empty where
the trees ended
where even the
bears had machines
}{
this was
how they
went away
a door
in a field
of flowers
}{
predictable words
arranged upon
the ground
they walk upon
they are removed
if too much
meaning gathers
Love Bob’s work. Glad at the choices he made here.
Best Spark/Cliff Note gloss he did on himself :
‘…removed / if too much / meaning gathers ‘
Really does what artists do
Rearranges what we have–
Words, colors, clay
In such a way
They are recognizable but not.
It’s a movie I’ve seen before
But now I appreciate the lighting,
Angles and mood music when they kiss.
This time around I ask, ‘Where’s the orchestra?’